Wednesday 20 October 2021

MY REVIEW!!!

 Hello! Have you heard of a game called dragon adventures? Because right now you are looking at a complete guide on how to be a DRAGON MASTER! I hope you enjoy! 

 
Dragons adventures is one of my favourtie games on roblox. Its very popular and I really like the graphics in the game. Have you ever played this game on roblox? If you haven't, Be sure to try it!
Bye~!!!

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  1. Wow Kaito, I can see you really LOVE Dragon Master because you have made such a beautiful job of your slides. Your informative descriptions have helped me learn a lot about the different kinds of dragons you can get in this game and what makes them more valuable. You have also added lots of images, so your slides look great too. I agree that the graphics can make something worthwhile looking at, I sometimes read a book purely because I love looking at the pictures... for instance any story written by Lauren Child is worth reading in my opinion because her drawings are so amazing!
    One thing I did notice is your spelling of "there". In some places it is used correctly but not in others. Can you check out the Word of the Day slides on our Class Site and see where you need to change there to their? Here is a link to the slides click here
    Thanks for sharing all this fantastic information! blog you later, Megan : )

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    1. Hi Megan, Yes I will try fixing the there, they're, and their's in my slide show. I am just not sure because they underline it with a red line so I dont know if I am right or if the grammar in the computer is right. (I hope I got them right)
      BYE~!

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    2. Hi Kaito, the grammar tool on Chromebooks can be really useful to help remind us to check things. However, we also need to learn the rules : ) Check out the slides and you will see the rules really clearly as pictures and words. Which way do you think you remember things better? When you look at images or at words? blog you later, Megan : )

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    3. Hi Megan, I agree that the grammar tool on Chromebooks can be really useful. I remember things by looking at images. It just like when you have a picture in a frame and it gives you memorys of that time.
      Which way is easiest for you?
      Bye!

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  2. Kia ora Kaito. Awesome slides. I didn't know anything about this game but now I sure do! I like the way you separated the facts from your opinions. It's good to make that clear for your reader. Writing a review is a really good skill these days as lots of people create reviews for movies, music, games, technology... What else you you write a review about?

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    1. Hi Phil. Thanks! It took me atleast 3 days to collect up all of that information and put it into a slide. I notice that you might of said you two times in your question and I can't really understand what your are saying.
      Have you ever wroten a review?
      Bye!

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    2. Hi Kaito. Thanks for the reply. Sorry for my mistake. I meant what else could you write a review about. Thanks for reminding me to check my comments more carefully.

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