Volcano Slides!!

 Hello fellow viewers! Today, I have finished my VOLCANO SLIDES!! which I would be happy to show you!  What a found hard about this is that the background and the text just wont go together so I spent like 10 minutes trying to find something good that would work. 

I hope you like it! 

 

 

Question: Have you done this already?  

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AUCKLAND AND BEYOND SLIDES!!

 Hello fellow viewers! Today I will be showing you my AUCKLAND AND BEYOND SLIDES!! I hope you like them!  

  

 

Just saying if this slide is to speedy or too sluggish you can always flick through it manually.  

Have you done this slide show already? Have you posted it on your blog? 

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My Summary For TKSST

 Hello! Today I will show you my SUMMARY for my TKSST.  Here is a link to the video I made a summary about: CLICK ME

It will begin here: I loved how he showed us how he made it so we can make it at home as well. The continuous looping makes it look so smooth running and satisfying. He used a lot of bricks to make that short run but its still VERY COOL. I am not sure if I have enough pieces to make one my self. But maybe I can build one out of some other material like cardboard.

Have you done a summary of something? 

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My TOYKO 2020 OLYMPICS!! (Soccer)

 HELLO, Today I have my TOKYO 2020 OLYMPICS (Soccer) Slides!! I hope you enjoy!

 

 Question: Did you watch this match on TV? 

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My 100 word story for (Coin operated)!!

Hello fellow viewers, Today have my 100 word story for my (Coin operated) FINALLY FINISHED!! So here it is!! (Red=planning writing & Black=100 word story) (You might have to zoom in by pressing: (Ctrl +)

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	At around about 1:00 pm a boy aged 5-7 was playing with his toy rocket ship while walking on the street with his mum.
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	While walking on the path the boy spots a coin-operated rocket ship. So he gets his coin and slides it in.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	The boy was expecting to fly off into space.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	But it only rocked back and forth. The boy was super depressed and threw his space helmet on the ground.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	The boy saves money by opening a lemonade stand to have another go at the rocket ship ride.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	He got very old while he was saving his money. But his wish came true! He flew into space!

And here is the 100 WORD STORY!!: One sunny afternoon, A boy was playing with his toy rocket while walking with his mum. After a few seconds of walking he finds a rocket ship ride! He got his coin from his pocket and slid it into the machine. He jumped in with excitement thinking that he would fly off into space. But really all it did was rock back and forth. The boy was so depressed that he threw his hat on the ground. After a few days, He opened a lemonade stand to save money and have another go at the ride. He got very old and finally he had enough money. So he dragged his sack of money to the machine and slid every single coin into it. He lunged in thinking that finally he could fly out into space! He pressed the button and as the last coin fell in….It WORKED! He FLEW UP INTO SPACE!

Question: What do you think about my writing? Do you have any feedback for me? 

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Is the Author Always Right??

 HELLO, Today I have finally finished my (Is the author always right?) SLIDES!!! So here it is!!

 

 

 

Question: Have you done this slide? 

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My (The present) WRITING!!

 Hi and today I will be showing you my (The Present) writing!! This week we have been learning to write in different point of views such as 3rd person, 2nd person, and 1st person. We did some planning writing (RED) before the real writing so we have a better understanding of what to write. 

Sentence 1 (character/scene)	Boy sits continuously pressing buttons on his controller
Sentence 2 (character/scene)	Mum Comes in and hands the boy a present.
Sentence 3 (Conflict)	RUF! A puppy came out barking loudly.
Sentence 4 (Conflict)	At first the boy was super excited but then he soon realised that it has a missing leg.
Sentence 5 (resolution)	Boy eventually gets bored of the game and starts laughing at the dog because of his hilarious mistakes and his limping.
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed)	At the start of the story the boy didn’t like the look of the dog because of its missing leg. Then he realizes that he can still have fun with the dog even though he has a missing leg.

 

HERE STARTS THE REAL WRITING: On a Sunday afternoon at 2:00 Jack sat continuously pressing buttons on his controller. After a few minutes his mum came back. “Hey honey I got a present for you!” “ Maybe you could stop playing video games and open the present!”. Ringgg! Mum's phone rang so she quickly answered it. While that was happening Jack opened the present. “Wooaah, A puppy!” exclaimed Jack. He looked super excited until… He found out that it has a missing leg. Not caring at all he threw the puppy on the ground and started playing video games again. The dog soon realised that there was a ball under the cupboard so he ran straight into the cupboard! Then got the ball and ran back to the boy. Boy soon got bored and thought in his mind “Hmmm, Maybe I could play with him” So he got the ball and shouted “I will be outside mum!” and got his support for his missing leg just like the dog! And went outside to play.  

Here is a short video that I wrote about: 

 

 

 Question: Have you ever written a story in 3rd person, 2nd person or 1st person before? 

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