Some writing from my Setting descriptive writing

Hi guys today I made a blog post about a piece of writing from my (Setting descriptive writing slide!!) 

I hope you like it! 

WRITING WILL START HERE!!: In the mysty woods, At 9:00 pm. I found a creaky abandoned house. SQUEAK! I heard the crying of bats. As I stepped closer to the house I got more and more terrified. Until I let out a ginormous “AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!” THE END 

QUESTION: Have you noticed any mistakes in my writing? IF you have please tell me in the comment sections bellow. 

BYE!!