Hi guy's this is a stroy about bradley's toy's going on an adventure I hipe you like it
A long time ago there was a boy named Bradley chalkers normally she was actually pretty bad and mean but now he's pretty good you know so please don't say that he's a monster or something but long time ago he had toys there was a few toys actually and those toys went for an adventure today in the open human world! and they needed some stuff for their mini backpacks on the mini arms or shoulders so they patch mostly food and water for their supply oh forgot these are the toy’s names so there are only 2 of them well so there is Bartholomew the bear and Ronnie the rabbit. Ronnie said let’s go to the place called street”
A long time ago there was a boy named Bradley chalkers normally she was actually pretty bad and mean but now he's pretty good you know so please don't say that he's a monster or something but long time ago he had toys there was a few toys actually and those toys went for an adventure today in the open human world! and they needed some stuff for their mini backpacks on the mini arms or shoulders so they patch mostly food and water for their supply oh forgot these are the toy’s names so there are only 2 of them well so there is Bartholomew the bear and Ronnie the rabbit. Ronnie said let’s go to the place called street”
Bartholemew said “ok” so they packed their bags with food,water bottles,some clothes, and a jacket just in case they get cold so of they went in the house and they actually thought that they changed their mind and just want to explore the house well what they called the mansion of the creeps so first they had to get down the stairs well what they call(again) the brick walls! (super dramatic noise) first they thought they should repel down but Bartholemuew said he just want’s to slide down but after a few minutes Bartholemuew thought that it was a bit to dangerous and he didn’t wan’t to break his leg bone so he stuck with Ronnie’s idea they went one step one step down when they got to the end they started to go to the living room “what the heck is this black box thingy” questioned Bartholemuew
“it’s called a television according to my knowledge”
“and what is this long thingy” asked Bartholemuew
“it’s called the remote it’s like the thing that controls the television” “now don’t ask me any more questions ok”
“wait one more what is this round wrinkily thing” said Bartholemuew
“it’s a human foot run!” now what will happen to Ronnie and Bartholemuew Continues…..
Talofa, I’m Quan in Room 8 from Owairaka District School. I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked that part when the big foot came along. Next time you should read your story to someone before publishing it so you can see where you need to add in full stops. Check out my blog at Quan’s Blog Please tell me whose foot is it?
ReplyDeleteHi Quan. Thank you for your advice. And this is my answer it was actually Bradley's foot. Thanks for commenting! blog ya later!
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