Wednesday, 14 April 2021

The coming storm writing

 Hi today I have finished my writing for (The coming storm) I hope you like it! 


 Writing will start here: BROOM! a car zoomed down the bumpy road.  

Crack! I heard the sound of thunder getting louder and louder!  

I kept running afraid I will get shocked by the dangerous lighting.   

And bizz! I got struck by the flashing lighting awaiting another chance to get someone else. THE END 


 Question: Have you done this already? Please tell me in the comment section bello!!⮯ 

Bye!!

 


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1 comment:

  1. Phil @ Ako Hiko15 April 2021 at 13:53

    Kia ora Kaito. Thanks for sharing your writing. I like the onomatopoeia you've used. What are you proud of? And what do you think you need to work on next?

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